OK, so for the sump system, I know the appeal is the ease of installation, BUT if I compared the time to install that sump and the time to "do it right" (not that that is wrong), Ill bet its the same..
I have done this both ways, I have taken out the tank module and custom installed the in tank pump, and I have used the inline pump.
I recommend the inline, I know its a bit louder BUT, I only hear it before the engine starts for 4 seconds, and I actually like it that way.
Use a walbro 255 inline, and wrap it with insulation, they sell a kit but I just cut up a beer cozy (black one) and wrap it up, then I don't screw them to the frame, Ill use black zip ties and make sure its all secured correctly..
I like the inline because if it fails, I can change it on the road, it hasn't happened yet (and I have used that same pump a lot, even on carbed motors with 29387), for my fi tech I have an extra 02 sensor and pump in my tool box...
Now for the return line there are tons of ways to do that, use the vent line, pop a whole in and use a grommet, but I like to change the tank at the time of the install, tanks are cheap and new gas sucks, so unless your tank is already new, I would factor that into the price, you don't want this all junked up..